As promised, here’s EXCERPT FOUR.

One thing I want you to keep in mind is this story is still in the editing phase. Which means, some things may or may not make it to the final cut. This is a draft. Even though, for the most part, I do not intend on making any drastic changes to the story, I just wanted to emphasize that Innocence, GA is in its 3rd round of edits and there may be changes. That’s all.

Please let me know what you think, by either leaving a comment or emailing me at: phetteogburn@gmail.com. I’d like to hear your feedback. What do you think of the characters so far? What’s your opinion of Ty?

If you haven’t gotten a chance to read the PROLOGUE please do so. EXCERPT ONE EXCERPT TWO & EXCERPT THREE follow this.

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I’ll be back next week with Excerpt FIVE!!!

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